Gemini Colony Draft Response

Jan 25th, 2011 | By | Category: Gemini Colony, Site News, Writing

Doug, my co-writer for Gemini Colony, has returned his comments on my initial draft.  My concerns were justified.  He agrees that the script needs significant re-writes in order to launch the show properly.  So, I’ll be taking some time to re-read and re-write the existing script to tighten it up and shift the focus a bit.

The hardest thing to write is an introduction.  A pilot episode has to be both a stand-alone story that will draw people in, and a “first chapter” that will set up a larger story capable of bringing people back episode after episode.  We want to do this right, so we’re taking the time.

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